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1、How to improve writing,Do you want to score high in the writing part ?,15？,20？,25!,Nothing is impossible!,Todays task,Write an application to an organization,Task1： 假定你是 。湖南省博物馆现在正在招募 , 你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写 。内容应包括: 个人情况： 个人条件： 承诺： 注意： 1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好。 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,一封申请信,英语好、爱好历史、善于沟通、乐于
2、奉献、住所离博物馆近,提供最佳服务,李华, 长沙人,英语解说员,年龄、性别、学历,Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as an English guide in your museum. Im a boy and Im 17. I was born in Changsha. Im a middle school student. I want to do something for the museum. First, Im good at English. Second, I like history. Th
3、ird, Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like volunteering. Last, I live near the museum. It is convenient for the work. If you give me the chance, Ill try my best to offer the best service to others. Please accept my application. I wont disappoint you! Looking forward to your reply. You
4、rs faithfully, Li Hua,whats more,I. Use correct sentence (使用正确完整的单句或复合句),1. Sentence structure: (使用结构正确完整的单句，切忌参杂中文的句子模式，切忌中文式字对字翻译) A. 单句结构 1） 主+谓语+宾语 主：名/代/Doing 或 To do/主语从句 (注意主谓人称数一致) 谓语：vt/vi+prep（注意时态以及数的变形） 宾语：名/代/doing/to do/宾语从句 2）主+谓语+表语 谓语:be/类系动词(seem,look,sound,taste,feel,touch) 表语:名/代
5、/adj/doing/to do/表语从句,I. Use correct sentences (使用正确句型）,3) 主+谓语+状语 谓语：vi ; 状语：adv/介词短语/状语从句 Examples : I forgot to tell you my phone number. The manager often asks him for some suggestion. Seeing is believing. (To see is to believe) He used to live in shanghai, he has lived here since last year. Thi
6、s idea sounds good ,he looked happy after he knew that.,2. 使用并列句(用and,moreover,but,however等连接的两个或多个句子） 3.使用复合句（主句+从句；状语从句，+主句） 1)定语从句：放在主句中某个先行名词之后的句子; 2)宾语从句：位于主句谓语(vt/vi+prep)之后的句子; 3)表语从句：位于主句谓语be/类系动词之后的句子; 4)主语从句：位于主句谓语前(即主句主语位置)的句子 5) 状语从句：位于主句谓语vi 之后的句子，状语从句也可以放在主句之前，但必须要带逗号。,I. Use different
7、 sentences (使用多样句型）,Examples: I hope to help him, but he refuse my help. He sits next to the woman who is wearing a red coat. 3. I am eager to know what he told you. 4. My question is what I should do next. 5.When well go outing depends on the weather. 6.Because he was ill yesterday,he didnt go to s
8、chool. 7.It is believed that success comes from hard work. 8. Its unknown who broke the window.,Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as an English guide in your museum. Im a boy and Im 17. I was born in Changsha. Im a middle school student. I want to do something for the museum
9、. First, Im good at English. Second, I like history. Third, Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like volunteering. Last, I live near the museum. It is convenient for me to do the work. If you give me the chance, Ill try my best to offer the best service to others. Please accept my applic
10、ation. I wont disappoint you! Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua,18,.Choose advanced phrases (选取高级词汇),be of great convenience,be ready to / be willing to ,Word,Phrase,I like volunteering. 2. I like history. 3. This is convenient for the work.,be fond of / be interested in / have a
11、great interest in/be crazy about,devoting myself to serving others,.Choose advanced phrases (选取高级词汇),Simple phrase,Advanced phrase,Im good at English. 2. I want to do something for the museum. 3. Ill try my best to offer the best service.,have a good knowledge of /have a gift / talent for,make a con
12、tribution to/ contribute to/ devote to,spare no effort /make every effort to,III. Use suitable sentences (使用合适句型）,1. I live near the museum . Its convenient for the work.,I live near the museum, _ _. (定语从句),2. Im a boy and Im 18. I was born in Changsha. Im a middle school student.,_ _.,(分词作状语/定语从句),
13、which is convenient for the work,Born in Changsha, Im an 18-year-old boy, who is studying in a middle school,Steps of writing a good article,Read the instructions carefully and decide the style. Follow typical patterns List the key points. Put the key points into sentences.,（列提纲）,（明审题）,（选句型）,（妙联句）,(
14、细复查),Develop the sentences into a passage.,Check your work.,北京国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，假设你是李华，请根据下列信息写一封申请信。 注意：1、词数不少于120。 2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,Task2：,姓名: 李华 性别: 男 年龄: 17岁 学校: 长沙市一中 其它: 爱好音乐,摄影;善于与人交流, 乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平 参加夏令营的目的: 结交朋友,了解外国文化,Task2：,The outline of the passage： Para1: Introdu
15、ce yourself. Para2: Reasons why you want to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp .,Practice makes perfect,Successs on the way ! Lets come to it ! Please complete it in 10 minutes !,北京国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动。假设你是李华，请根据下列信息写一封申请书。 注意：1、词数不少于120字。 2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,Task2：,姓名:李华 性别:
16、男 年龄:17岁 学校:长沙市一中 其它:爱好音乐,摄影;善于与人交流, 乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平 参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化,A sample of writing,Dear Sir / Madam My name is Li Hua, and Im a 17-year-old boy （1）（分词或定语从句） in Changsha No. 1 Middle School. （2）我爱好广泛 （S+V+O）. First of all,（3）我热爱音乐（V-ing作主语）. （4）连接过渡, Im interested in photography because （5）
17、 . （6）善于与人交流（V-ing 作原因状语）, I make many friends.（7）连接过渡, Im always ready to help others. I would like to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp for many reasons. The first reason （8）是我热爱生活，热爱自然、和平. But（9）最重要的原因是，这为我提供了一个结交朋友，了解外国文化的机会. If （10） （省略&非谓语）the chance, I will make full use of it to broa
18、den my horizon and learn from others. Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua,A sample of writing,Dear Sir / Madam My name is Li Hua, and Im a 17-year-old boy （1） in Changsha No. 1 Middle School. （2） . First of all,（3） . （4） , Im interested in photography because （5） （6） I make many fri
19、ends.（7） , Im always ready to help others.,分词或定语从句,(who is) studying,我爱好广泛 (S+V+O),I have varieties of interests,我热爱音乐（V-ing作主语）,enjoying music is my favorite,连接过渡,In addition to that,it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life.,善于与 人交流（V-ing 作原因状语）,Being good at communicating with other
20、s,连接过渡,Whats more,A sample of writing,I would like to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp for many reasons. The first reason （8） But（9） If （10） （省略&非谓语）the chance, I will make full use of it to broaden my horizon and learn from others. Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua,是我热爱生
21、活，热爱自然、和平,lies in the fact that I love life, nature as well as peace.,最重要 的原因是，这为我提供了一个结交朋友，了解外国 文化的机会.,the most important reason is that I think it a great opportunity to make friends with people from different countries and learn about their cultures.,given/getting,Homework,Please perfect your composition after class. Make your final copy as neat as possible. then correct it.,May you all succeed!,