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1、如何取得作文高分 -CET4作文精讲（三）,DAI Hui English Dept., SFL GDUT,However mean your life is, meet it and live it ;do not shun it and call it hard names. It is not so bad as you are. It looks poorest when you are richest. The fault-finder will find faults in paradise. Love your life, poor as it is. Do not troubl
2、e yourself much to get new things, whether clothes or friends.Turn the old, return to them. Things do not change; we change. Sell your clothes and keep your thoughts. -Henry David Thoreau,二、 TYPE 2 解决问题型,题目：BicyclesAn Important Means of Transport in China 提纲： （1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及 （2）和汽车的比较 （3）自行车在中国的前途,
3、TYPE 2 解决问题型,题目：Certificate Craze on Campus 1106 提纲： 1. 现在许多人热衷于各种证书考试； 2. 其目的各不相同； 3. 在我看来。,Nowadaays there is a “certificare craze on campus. Thousands are keen on working for various certificates, such as CET Band 4 and Band 6 certificates, Business Englisn Certificate, and other different profes
4、sional certificates.,But why is there is such a craze? First, it has much to do with the fierce competitive workforce market. It is widely belived that the more certificates a college student has on graduation, the better chance he has for a decent job. Second, many students just want to prove thems
5、elves by working for a certificate. They have been interested in a certain field and have worked hard on it, so they want a certificate to justify their efforts.,I think the certificate craze is good for both the society and students. When students combine their work for some certificates with their
6、 academic efforts, their college life will be more fruitful than otherwise,In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing; quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for
7、a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear?,P1,There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First of all, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce co
8、mpetition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Secondly, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themsel
9、ves to run from one exam to another.,P2,P3,From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving o
10、ur ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.,常用句子拓展,B 观点句型 人们重视/看中/珍爱某物 place a high value on sth./treasure sth/cherish sth. 增强竞争力 sharpen ones edge/ enhance ones competitiveness 起.重要作用 play a central role in/ play a chief part in 对.有好处 . pays off / it pays to / sth. is beneficial
11、 (rewarding) 对.有坏处. have a negative impact on / do harm (damage) to sth. 促进/提高/增强/改善 give a boost to/optimize/ enhance/ boost/accelerate 减低/降低/影响 decrease/ decelerate/ influence/ have an impact on/have effects on,常用句子拓展 结尾类,A.引出结尾句型 最重要的是- Last but not least/ One thing to be noted is/ The ultimate e
12、lement I have to make is/ The greatest significance of all is/ 无论怎样-No matter what happens, one thing is that/ Whatever occurs, just bear in mind that/ 毋庸置疑-it goes without saying that/Needless to say,/ It is absolutely doubtless that 综上所述，我们可得出结论是From what has been discussed above/Taking into accou
13、nt all these features/ From the analysis above, we may safely draw the conclusion that,常用句子拓展 结尾类,B. 措施类 真到了该的时候了It is high time that we placed great emphasis on(好)/It is high time that we put an end to the undesirable phenomenon of(坏) 毋庸置疑，对于问题， 我们应该给与更多重视。There is little doubt/ no denying that fur
14、ther attention must be paid to the problem of 很必要的是我们应采取有效措施来阻止事情的恶化。It is indispensable that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation from worsening.,总结T2 (问题解决型)命题特点,提纲1 出现一种现象/ 情况。 提纲2出现“为什么”，“原因”, “解释”，“例如” 提纲3出现 “如何解决”,“怎么办”, “你的做法”,请根据提纲写一段结尾。(7MIN),提纲：如何提高学校的伙食质量。要求：按照TYPE 2
15、 的模板，写一个结尾，不超过50词。,Homework: Creating a Green Campus,140 words. 提纲: 1)建设绿色校园十分重要 2）绿色校园不仅指绿色环境 3） 为了建设绿色校园我们应该。,作文实用技巧 (下),1用词 a. 形象生动， 多用实意词和少用超高频词 Chinas economy begins to increase/ （ ）. soar Piracy has become a phenomenon that can be seen everywhere. Piracy has become a （ ） phenomenon. prevalent/
16、 prevailing,挖掘身边的美词,地名 ：南屏晚钟，雷峰夕照 ，塞北，江南 人名：齐白石，江小鱼，李若竹，方喆人 词牌：西江月， 如梦令， 忆江南 形容词： 缱绻，旖旎，娉婷，料峭 爱情： 关关雎鸠，在河之洲。 盈盈一水间。 “我行过许多地方的桥，看过许多次数的云，喝过许多种类的酒，却只爱过 一个正当最好年龄的人。”,“翩若惊鸿，婉若游龙，荣曜秋菊，华茂春松。仿佛兮若轻云之蔽月，飘飖兮若流风之回雪。” -洛神赋，曹植,“湖水悠悠漾爱痕，岸花摇影狎波翻。只容天女来修供，不遣阿难着体温。”,所谓文化的意义，就是时空荏苒，千年之下，仍然能用相同的符号（文字、音乐、绘画、建筑，以及一切与艺术相关
17、的人类活动），呼应你类似的美好感受，从而体味生之美好。人与动物最根本的区别，大抵就在这里。,1用词,b. 词语的感情色彩 I am foolish, my son is ( ), and my ex-husband is ( ). Silly, stupid Women are ( ) and ( ); men are ugly and thin. homely and slender,1用词,c. 准确 I must improve my English level/（ ）. The traffic in big cities is getting more and more crowded
18、/ （ ）.,1用词,d. 明白易懂 To be a three-good/（ ） student, we have to work hard. Excellent/ all-round/ versatile In a nutshell / （ ）, I think the best way to read is to read extensively In conclusion, to conclude, All in all,2句子,a. 句法结构 牛津高阶英汉双解 1064-1065：40/18 SV/SVO/SP,日耳曼语系的句法,名词阴阳性：太阳，月亮，勺子，叉子， 动词变位， 六种
19、 四个格位 N G A D 介词多 语序 发音 思维,2句子,b. 意义表达和逻辑 意义表达： 逻辑： e.g. Smoking is definitely harmful nowadays, _, smoking ban is universal across the nation.,2句子,c. 位置和功能（主题句，段落主题句，总结句） d. 连接 经典连接。 Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly, For one thing,For another, Last but importantly, In the first place,In the second place,Fi
20、nally, On one hand,On the other hand, First of all,In addition,Consequently, To begin with, whats more, last but not the least,T2 问题解决型模板 P1 S1,第一段： 。正成为一个颇受关注的话题，在人群中引起热议。 Recently, 题目 has become a common interest among people/ university students, which in turn leads to a hot discussion. Presently
21、 a great number of people recognized the importance of 题目。,T2 问题解决型模板 P2 S1,第二段： 什么原因使得大家如此关注呢？ 举例：Certificate Craze on Campus. How to Build A Green Campus Online Shopping Harmfulness of Fake Commodities Cheating in Exams,T2 问题解决型模板 P2 S1,What are the reasons for peoples attention to this phenomenon
22、? What on earth leads to such craze? What are the reasons accounting for such phenomenon? How many reasons could possibly account for this tendency?,T2 问题解决型模板 P2 S2 正（中）,首先， XX问题的重要性在于。 Firstly, the significance of 题目lies in the fact that people/students are in desperate need of 一个绿色校园 很多证书 有效的英语学习
23、 一技之长 in order to have a guaranteed 环境/未来/明天。,T2 问题解决型模板 P2 S3 正（中）,其次，拥有也可以使我们更好的获取知识。 Obtaining/ Having 题目里的核心名词（最好能用和题目不同的表述） can enable us to gain a better and more profound understanding of 知识/ 环境/ 生活/ 社会 itself。 例如。Take YY for example.,T2 问题解决型模板 P2 S4正（中）,最后，理解了XX的重要性可以帮助我们认清A和B的关系。 A underst
24、anding of 绿色校园/ 外语的重要性/考证现象, finally, can make us more aware of the relationship between 人类和世界 学习与工作 生活与健康 学习和环境 效率和经济,T2 问题解决型模板 P2 S2 （反）,如：压力山大，人与人的不信任、环境污染，作弊 , 假货,食品安全问题。 首先， XX 是由于人们/ 学生们没有真正意识到。的价值 In the first place, the XX results from a lack of recognition of the true value of People, firs
25、t of all, failed to recognize the real value of 诚信 健康 学习 知识产权 例如：,T2 问题解决型模板 P2 S4 （反）,其次，目前的生活方式/ 学习方式太过于强调实用性/ 功利性。 Additionally, the traditional way of learning/ living emphasizes too much on the so-called practicality/ function/ efficiency/utility. 例如。 学钢琴只是为了获奖 建电厂只是为了发电 盗版只是为了使用 打工只是为了挣钱,T2 问题
26、解决型模板 P3 S1,我们该怎样做来支持/ 鼓励/ 反对/ 制止 这种现象呢？ To conclude, how shall we do to support/ advocate/ come out in favor of fight against/ be against/ oppose the above phenomenon?,T2 问题解决型模板 P3 S2,一方面， 政府/当局者/ 校方应该制定清晰的政策来引导人们的认识 On one hand, the government the authority universities should work out more relev
27、ant regulations to make people more oriented to the importance of this issue.,T2 问题解决型模板 P3 S3,另一方面， 公民/ 学生自己也要强化自己对。问题的触觉。 On the other hand, citizens/ students themselves should also reinforce their own awareness of erecting a green campus harmfulness of fake commodities importance of English lear
28、ning severity of cheating in exams,T2 问题解决型模板 P3 S4,只有两方面努力结合好了，我们才能。 Only by achieving a balance between the above two factors the joint efforts of the above-mentioned factors can people/students have a bright future.,3 避免中式英语 改错练习 0706,1 English interesting club 2 The numbers associated with ident
29、ity theft are beginning to add up fast these days. 3 If you finish the courses, youll become the social queen in our party. Whats more, in addition, we also can produce some surveiner. 4 Youll fell good when you join in our club. 5 Only need a letter with your name, age, like something, good at some
30、thing and so on. 6 I know someone couldnt understand our clubs meanings. 7 Our club is the best club. Why I say that? 8 Dont lose more time. 9 Our club is your developing room. 10. So much is waiting for your participate in.,改错练习 0706,11 The benefits join our club is you can improve your kill of tak
31、ing photo. 12 If a man sows, he shall a reap. 13 A new club “PPT” 14 In our club, there are many numbers. 15 Than you hear this, are you mind moving, 16 “Welcome to our club”, a man said. 17 A man who is useful to the society. 18 First, if you join our club, youll get scores to gain academic marks,
32、the scores can help you get scholarship on a higher chance. Second, improve yourself. 19 Our club wait for your telephone. 20 Are you moving?,改错练习 0706,21 Yoga come from Indonesia. 22 Anything is impossible. 23 Let us build her a more bright future. 24 We very very hope 25 for loving study English s
33、tudents, 26 The club is a Deng Xiao Ping Club 27 We can not become he, but we can study he. 28 Our club is clime the hill club. 29 Our club have a important thing which is everyday. 30 You must go to bed and go sleeping early.,P1:currently，XX plays a more and more significant role in our day-to-day
34、life/competitive and challenging society. An increasing number of people show great enthusiasm for XX They believe that. P2: X has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problem as well. When it comes to XX, hence, different individuals hold various views. They argue that P3: However,
35、 as for me, I have a great/negative attitude toward/that XX To sum up briefly, only when .,The issue overI1 currently numerous students dont pay attention to spelling is heatedly discussed. Some people claim that spelling is not valid to study EnglishI2 . They payI3 more time for reading and listeni
36、ng. They emphasize that these means would I4 more critical. The reason why students dont care about spelling is that with the evolution of society,it is sensible to reading I5 and listening is an frequent means to improve English ability which can get the high score.They prefer to doingI6 more readi
37、ng and listening rather than paying I7 attention to spelling so that they can catch high mark. So far I am concerned, spelling is equal(ly) significant( as well as )reading and listening.It is basicalI8 for studying English.I agree what the students consider,however,pay more attention to spelling is also critical.So we may be care(ful) about listening and reading, (and)at the sametime (should) pay attention to spelling.,