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1、高考写作训练(一),南师附中06年5月试题,假设你是北京新世纪中学的一名学生，你笑将举办一次以“”New Beijing, New Olympics”为主题的英文演讲比赛，以展示北京中学生积极迎接奥运的情况。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，内容应涉及如下要点： 1、不文明行为； 2、英语学习； 3、奥运精神； 4、其他做法 注意：1、演讲稿应该包括所有要点 2、词数120左右 3、演讲稿开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friend, The year 2008 is approaching. In order to present a very successful Olympic Games
2、 to the world, _,掌握如何写好篇章的技巧：,（1）注意篇章结构，合理布局 开始部分（opening paragraph）说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分（Body paragraphs）围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）对全文的总结和概括。 要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。,（2）确定主题句 主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。 写主题句应注意以下几点：
3、归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 提炼出一句具有概括性的话 主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。,写作步骤,审题 构思 草稿 誊写,体裁 2. 人称 3. 时态 4. 要点,确定主题 文章结构段落的安排 整合要点- 要点顺序、段落衔接常用句式、短语等 开放部分内容的组织,审题,体裁: 时态: 人称: 要点:,说明,现在、将来,第一、三人称,构思1-文章主题,In order to present a very successful Olympic Games, we should try our best to do something for the coming Games. In order
4、 to present a very successful Olympic Games, we really have a lot of things to do, which is of great importance. In order to present a very successful Olympic Games, we should do everything we can to make full preparations for the Games.,构思2-文章结构,不文明行为 英语学习 奥运精神 其他做法,Part 1,Part 2,1、根据主题安排段落,构思3-整合要
5、点,不文明行为 英语学习 奥运精神 其他做法,Part 1,2、根据段落安排， 确定段落主 题句。,A lot of things can be done to make preparations.,构思3-整合要点,不文明行为 英语学习 奥运精神 其他做法,Part 1,改正,加强,学习 宣传,3、根据段落主题句，丰富、完善和 合理安排要点。,构思3-整合要点,不文明行为 英语学习 奥运精神 其他做法,改正,加强,学习 宣传,4、根据各要点内容，运用有把握的短语或句型来表达.,get rid of some impolite behavior pay more attention to ou
6、r learn from the Olympic spirits/ get across to ,构思3-整合要点,不文明行为 英语学习 奥运精神 其他做法,改正,加强,学习 宣传,5、根据各要点之间的关系，有效使用各种衔接手段：添加细节，衔接词。,get rid of some impolite behavior， such as spitting or littering . In order to communicate well with , pay more attention to our Whats more/ Besides, learn from the Olympic sp
7、irits/ get across to so that,举例,添加状语,运用衔接词,Example 1,(A lot of things can be done to make preparations.) First of all, we should improve our behavior. There do exist many impolite actions which may leave a bad impression on foreigners. Therefore we must behave well. English study is also very import
8、ant. Only by learning English well can we communicate with foreign visitors and show them the kindness of our Chinese. Whats more, we can try our best to get Olympic spirits across to all the people in Beijing, even all over the country. At that moment, our Chinese people will open our hearts to wel
9、come people from all over the world.,构思3-开放部分,1、主题句,There are still many other things we can do.,2、确定支持信息,For example, we can be volunteers during the Games.,In order to make a good impression on all the athletes or visitors, we should do all we can to protect the environment from now on.,To make it
10、 the best ever games, we should devote ourselves to the preparations work.,添加状语：目的，结果等,举例,构思3-开放部分,3、结束句,We are sure that we can make the 29th Olympic Games a great success.,I believe nothing is impossible for a willing mind. We can manage it!,Now Im here appealing to all the students to make a contribution to the 2008 Olympic Games. If we do, Beijing will surely give a surprise to the world.,结尾要简明扼要有力度,