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1、1、老师拿到的标准 写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分 数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最 关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中 考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章 才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？ 评分标准： 1。 整篇作文满分 20 分，其中内容 8 分，语言 8 分，结构 4 分。 2。 内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准 确，加整体印象分1 分。 3。 不满 60 个词，少 15 个词 扣 0.5 分，610 个词扣 1 分。 4。 所有给出问题涉及的三项内容， 每少一项扣 3 分。 5。 每个拼写，大小写，标点符号 等错误扣 0.5 分； 同一的拼写错误不重复 扣分，扣分总和不超过2 分。 6。 语法错
2、误每项扣 1 分，同一错 误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2 分。 2、老师想看到的标准 语言（8 分）： 词固定搭配、 高频重点词汇； 句复杂句（各种从句）、特殊 句型、正确的句子！ 内容（8 分）： （总、分）论点、 论据支持句； 简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。 结构（4 分）： 语言结构 句子 重点突出、内容清晰； 内容结构 论点、论据以及记叙 之间的逻辑关系； 句数控制 对于相对内容的句数 掌握； 亮点、出彩点 排比、拟人、谚 语、成语、押韵等。 五种 2016中考英语作文万能模板 在初三这个宝贵的时间里，同学们一 定要把英语的基础搞扎实，万丈高楼平 地起，我们一定要做好铺垫。中考英语 作文是
3、必考项，重要性不言而喻。它也 是让大多数学生最头疼的事情。英文写 作是一项系统工程，提高英语写作能力 不是一蹴而就的，不仅有赖于扎实的语 言基本 功，即听、说、读、写综合技能， 而且有赖于大量的写作训练。整理了 2016中考英语作文万能模板，供大家参 考。 2016中考英语作文万能模板：图表作文 框架 _as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart)，_作文 题目的议题 _ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/in
4、creases/drops/decreases)， significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from_ in _ to _ in _ 。 From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart ， it goes without saying that _ 。 Thereareatleasttwogood reasons accounting for _。 On theonehand， _。 Onthe otherhand，_ isdueto thefactthat _。In addi
5、tion， _ is responsible for _。Maybethereare someotherreasons toshow _。Butitisgenerally believedthattheabove mentionedreasonsarecommonly convincing 。 AsfarasIamconcerned ，I hold the point of view that _ 。 I amsuremyopinionisboth soundandwell-grounded。 2016中考英语作文万能模板：说明利弊 题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再 对比事物本身的利弊
6、，有时也会单从一 个角度 (利或弊 )出发， 最后往往要求考生 表明自己的态度 (或对事物前景提出预 测) 1。 说明事物现状， 2。 事物本身的优缺点 (或一方面 ) 3。 你对现状 (或前景 )的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life。 Generally， its advantages can be seen as follows。 First -(A 的优点之一 )。 Besides -(A 的优点之二 )。 But every coin has two s
7、ides。 The negative aspects are also apparent。 One of the important disadvantages is that -(A 的第一个缺点 )。To make matters worse ，-(A 的第二个缺点 )。 Through the above analysis ， I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones 。 Therefore， I would like to -( 我的看法 )。 (From the comparison between
8、 these positive and negative effects of A， we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in。 Only by this way， -( 对 前景的预测 )。) 2016中考英语作文万能模板：阐述主题 题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提 纲的要求进行论述。 1。 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义。 2。 分析并举例使其更充实。 中考英语作文万能模板：解决方法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 1。 问题现状， 2。 怎样解决 (解决方案的优
9、缺点 ) In recent days ， we have to face I problem-A， which is becoming more and more serious 。 First， -( 说明 A 的现状 )。Second ， -( 举例进一步说明现状 ) Confronted with A， we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation 。 For one thing， -( 解决方法一 )。 For another -( 解决方法二 )。 Finally， -( 解决方法三
10、 )。 Personally ， I believe that -(我 的解决方法 )。 Consequently ， I m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because -( 带来的 好处)。 2016中考英语作文万能模板：现象说明 文 Recently _ ，what amazes us most is_ ， it is true that_。 There are many reasons explaining_ _。 The main reason is_ 。 what is more_ 。 thirdly_ 。 As a
11、result_ 。 Considering all there ， _ 。 For one thing_ ， for another_ 。In Conclusion_ 。 中考英语作文万能模板：说明原因型题 型 Currently， XX has been the order of the day 。This does demonstrate ，the theory - nothing is more valuable than XX 。It is clear that ( 1 )。 If you ( 2 )， as a result ，your dreams will come true 。
12、 On the contrary， if you (3)。 Failure will be followingwith you 。It turns out that all your plan falls through 。No one can deny another fact that (4) 。You dont have tolook very far to find out the truth ， in respect that we all know (5) 。It will exert a profound influence upon (6) 。 With reference t
13、o my standpoint ，I think ( 7)。 1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自 己的看法。 1。有一些人认为 2。另一些人认 为3。我的看法 The topic of -( 主题)is becoming more and more popular recently。 There are two sides of opinions of it 。 Some people say A is heir favorite。 They hold their view for the reason of -( 支持 A 的 理由一 )What is more， - 理 由二)。 Mor
14、eover，-( 理由 三)。 While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons。 Firstly， -( 支持 B 的理由一 )。 Secondly (besides) ，-( 理 由二)。 Thirdly (finally) ， -( 理由三 )。 From my point of view， I think -( 我的观点 )。 The reason is that-( 原因)。 As a matter of fact， there are some other reasons to e
15、xplain my choice。 For me， the former is surely a wise choice 。 2) 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观 点 Some people believe that -( 观点一 )。 For example， they think-( 举例说明 )。 And it will bring them-( 为他们带来的好 处)。 In my opinion， I never think this reason can be the point 。 For one thing， -( 我不同意该看法的理由 一)。 For another thin
16、g， -( 反对的理由之二 )。 Form all what I have said， I agree to the thought that -( 我对文 章所讨论主题的看法 )。 2016年中考英语得满分作文四大妙招 目前这时间，有的同学开始焦虑： 距离中考越来越近，那么如何才可以在 这段时间内提高自己的写作水平呢？其 实，中考英语写作是很容易提高的。作 者总结了以下写作文时需要注意的四个 方面，希望对大家有所启发。 第一，词汇量要充足。 词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是 否能写得下去。 第二，审题要充分。 我所教的学生中在写英语作文时， 普遍存在这样一个情况：看完作文题， 就开始写，想到哪
17、写到哪，只要把字数 凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章， 看起来就像在记流水帐， 没有任何逻辑， 杂乱无章，毫无条理，同时容易出现用 错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想，如 果你是试卷的命题人，你出作文题的时 候，肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所 以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一 步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、 字数方面，确保第一遍审题就能保证得 到基本分。同时还要文体和时态，因为 不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同 的，时态的要求也非常重要。 第三，提纲要详细。 审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生 认为，中考英语作文译成中文，最多是 小学二年级的语文作文水平，所以根本 没有必要列提纲。其实，这种想法是
18、非 常错误的，因为提纲不仅能使文章的结 构清晰，还有很重要的一点：防止漏掉 作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很 重要的要求：要点要全。如果你漏掉了 需要写的内容，即使文章写得再优美， 用词再准确，也拿不了高分。最后要注 意打草稿，然后修改。这样可以保证错 误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能 保持卷面整洁。 第四，文化差异要注意 我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达 方式有很大的差异，所以体现在作文表 达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表 达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重 中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的 表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运 用就能避免类似的问题。 第五，细节错误要摒弃。 很多孩子在
19、写作文时常常感觉写得 非常好，用上了几个高级句型或者不错 的词汇短语，以为可以得高分，但最终 结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的 原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人 称单数，名词的单复数，大小写，甚至 标点、书写、段落安排等，这些细节问 题也很重要。 最后：背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作 文集 写作很容易在短时间内有大的飞 跃，要做的就是积累一些经典的句型、 地道的表达方式。可以背诵阅读优秀的 中学生的作文集，把精彩的段落和句子 抄下来并仿写，最后整理出几十个最常 用、最精彩的表达法，写作文时有意识 地想一想，总能用上几个。 做好以上几个方面，中考英语写作是 很容易提高的！ 2016中考英语作文预测
20、： Make Track for a Star At present more and more students chase stars,especially many middle school students. When it comes the problem of star-worshipping,people hold the different ideas. Some people agreewith star-worshipping. There are many reasons.Firstly, its fashionable for students to discuss
21、 starsthings among their classmates. Secondly, they can realize more culture. Thirdly, they can study starsadvantages and achieve our own aim extremely hard. However, others are against the idea above.They think that star-worshipping costs a lot of money and time. They blindly worship easily and los
22、e direction. They coda imitate stars and easily get bad habit. Even, they waste school work. In my opinion, star-worshipping is a bad thing. Tow reasons can explain my idea. On the onehand, we spend a lot of afford to understand the stars entertainment news. On the otherhand. It affects our study. A
23、fter all, its very important for us to have our own career. In a word,we must have a rational way to worship star . 1.沉迷网络游戏 题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影 响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎 么帮他呢 ?请用下面所给的提示词写一 篇不少于 80 字的短文。字迹工整，语言 流畅。 提示词： give up concentrate on be (become)interested in 范文 Li Hua spent too much time playing comput
24、er games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is
25、 bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subject
26、s. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, Im sure he will make great progress soon. 2.怎样学好英语 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已 经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语 是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习 经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请 从听、说、读
27、、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 要求：1. 词数：80100词(开头已 给出，不计入总词数 ) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确， 逻辑清晰。 范文 How to learn English well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions. First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful
28、 to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes youll make. Wed better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. Its good for us. At last, w
29、e should recite some good passages and keep diaries. In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well. 3.如何减压让生活更美好 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产 生压力 ,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中 存在的心理压力问题 ,你们班特意开展了 一次以 “Less Pressure, Better Life“ 为主 题的英语演讲比赛 ,请你准备发言稿 ,谈 谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分
30、 享,内容包括 : (1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什 么; (2) 我的压力是什么 ; (3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和 校名。词数 80100。 范文 Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, w
31、hile others may worry about their exams. I m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to re
32、lax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. That s all. Thank you! 4.学做好人好事 今年是学习雷锋五十周年纪念日， 雷锋同志说过： “ 我要把有限的生命，投 入到无限的为人民服务之中去。” 请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不 少于 80 字的作文。 在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇 敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你 在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。 范文 Leifeng was known as
33、a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character. Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a me
34、aningless slogan “learn from Leifeng, our decent idol ”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict. To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework i
35、s my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them. I strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of us treat Leifeng as our model and copy his spirit. 5.怎样保持健康的生活习惯 健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们 是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯 应当是怎样的呢 ?请根据下面的信息提 示
36、,写一篇短文 ,首句已给出。 信息提示：健康饮食 ;早睡早起 ,不熬 夜;参加运动 ,强身健体。 要求:根据信息提示 ,把握要点 ,适当 发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80 词左右。 范文 I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our heal
37、th. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twic
38、e a day. If we dont feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once. 6.毕业感想 初中生活马上就要结束了 ,三年的初 中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的 回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆 的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和 事后你的感想 (请不要写出真实的学校 名称以及真实姓名 )。 提示词语 : three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry 范文 How time flies! I have studied in my school for t
39、hree years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried,
40、 I still couldnt do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I ve become interested in English and I m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become o
41、ne of her students. Ive learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others. 9.幸福 幸福是什么 ?幸福是父母为你营造 的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许 的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯 奶茶，幸福是 请以 My happiness 为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到 幸福的事情。 要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词 准确, 字迹工整， 80-100词。 范文 Happiness is
42、 important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesnt matt
43、er, my child. Remember well be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my paren ts love. I want to be a good child for my parents. 10.感恩
44、 对父母心存感恩，因为他们给予我 生命，让我健康成长 ;对老师心存感恩， 因为他们给了我教诲，让我抛却愚昧;对 朋友心存感恩，因为他们给了我友爱;对 社会心存感恩，因为社会给了我智慧和 力量。自从国家实施义务教育以来，书 本免费，食宿免费，而且还有贫困助学 金等。面对这些，我们应该心存感恩， 感谢祖国对我们的厚望和期盼。让我们 永远记住：感谢父母、感谢老师、感谢 朋友、感谢全社会 !请以“ 感恩” 为话题写 一篇 80100 字的作文。 范文 What should we thank? The thankful great universe provides the environment o
45、f existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with us existence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for. The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feel
46、ing of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life! The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, and put on the wing which flies towar
47、d the ideal for us. The thankful classmate and friend grow up with us and let us no longer stand alone in the itinerary of life. The thankful our country provides us with free books, dormitory and food. Whenever it is, we should keep a thankful heart towards everything existed. Only thus, can we become a useful man. 13.爱好 范文 My Hobby I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I