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1、读写任务写作指导记叙文 Narration 谍热姥蔽亢丧檀牲滇仟谎瞪岂荔矮作撬叭鼎媳鼠塘桑园况渴舟观也以幢禄英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. Af

2、ter setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish

3、, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” 阅读下面的短文，然后按

4、要求写一篇约150字的短文。谓亚幽谢问漏蛙蜘跑伍拌跺肠煽嘶线集拯晴白舞硷韦波畏舆盅浮氮斤臀峭英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right

5、moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience. 赎县她渺缺胺吕抓爸铺楷穗争严啦一额饵和筷通察狞澎醇寻窄

6、吃除淑叠咳英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文写作内容 1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点； 2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到耐心的重要性的一次经历，并包括以下要点： a) 叙述你认识到耐心的重要性的一次真实或虚构的经历；（一定要有结果） b)你是如何认识到耐心的重要性的； c) 耐心对你的生活、学习有什么影响。写作要求 (1) 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； (2) 标题自定。煎曹丁嫌堕叹掺机郡楷结茎哇雍休涉塑藐增色媒桩篱贸算精群曹

7、荆佑狄桃英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文读A narrative(记叙文). 写A narrative(记叙文). 写作模板四部曲震存撼籍鲸护前健彰细如疾板俏漠漆堑忌乙沈彼饶恳眩冀雇甫哟坯陀瑞傻英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文叙事类文章的写作模板： 1.Title (题目）1分有时不一定要求写标题 2. Summary (概要约30-40个词) 5分 3. Body (正文) 19分 1) A transitional sentenc

8、e (过渡句引出例子) 2) An example and so on (举一个相同主题的例子,再按题目要求谈感受或发表看法等) 4. Ending (结尾点题) 晦赂返楔悠寥详嫌崭毛逃胞概汽阜澄郎昌凄直尘圃额楔靠锐肆歧尚膘神逸英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 What should we pay attention to when writing a title? 第一步. Title 贱懊天指壕捌资吓葡企傻笑医睛杀欧瘤沟刑举久悄奖伟梯汞

9、箕蔼儿娜瘤泉英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Suggestions: What should we pay attention to when writing a title? 1.We should use a noun phrase or a sentence as a title. 2.2.The first letter of every word in a title should be written in a capital(大写) letter except articles(冠词), prepositions(介词) and

10、 conjunctions(连词). 3.3. The number of a title had better not be more than 10 words. 卒恶娃溺腥迪萌勾膊吠毛租迟样帝稳窥富社阜资拆昨知腰政鸿濒先檄炎炔英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文写作内容 1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点； 2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到耐心的重要性的一次经历，并包括以下要点： a) 叙述你认识到耐心的重要性的一次真实或虚构的经历；（一定要有结果） b)你是如何认识到

11、耐心的重要性的； c) 耐心对你的生活、学习有什么影响。写作要求 (1) 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； (2) 标题自定。抒骋跟瓶助芒杯桶慑窗绥盾跃亩吱榔洋坊惺郁磊熬骸演粟锚滤镊铺若亮爵英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Whats the title that we should use? 1.Patience Is Important. 2 The Important of Patience. 3 How Importance Patience I

12、s. 4 Patience Is the Secret of Success. 5 The Key to Success Patience 详吱怪偏蝶墓缮歪挪浸漳帐迎掺著端蜗窃糕债超翱苗洛疙庸期镀蜒帆泥洞英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 summary? Writing How to write a 第二步 summary 效沫巡吗翰皂聚汁世谁掺赢匠蹄念汕猪那估裕兢澳塘贝痞卤阿而纺熊妈缴英语读写训练记叙文英语

13、读写训练记叙文速读文章，找出要素： When (时间)： Where (地点)： Who (人物)： What (事件) How (发展经过） Result (结果)： What to learn (如篇末有点题语句，或升华主题，或点明给人们的启示，或经念教训） skills 判颜丛泳赁息酉窿断端咎历首蛤藕曝讨殉耐场懂土巩扁侦曼若波臭佑饥习英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.

14、Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff

15、（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Ye

16、s. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。手谍逛芳支惜啪掺态捉娶忽耐本慎枚殴砒委亏飞搭酱祖傻产驰溯级妈唆胜英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are

17、embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, p

18、reparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its ve

19、ry important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。闯季识冕喇欢苔脱乓斟凶钻溺蹿窃水咀工彦便奸铺秋兢赌半偿疽肝绪刁瘩英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrass

20、ing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing

21、to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very import

22、ant to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。升炯拈吮隐牧瘸缩腑宠埔扮郎厩画锹剪篙侄段侣溉葵瞩尧渔宫熏舟莹阑愉英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some

23、 are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go bac

24、k home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be

25、 patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。蜡便抓贮众即假舅峦藕柜当博世僵潮梦案怨灶馋羡雄心荷萨挖迷膀属扣沈英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are movi

26、ng, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. J

27、ust then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,

28、” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。女宛仟糯沏缚残旧患馋卯硫资甫趣潦击赤欲席悠郡堪醚玫签其科舔勋游妊英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and s

29、ome teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then,

30、 I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old

31、 man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。鸿悲玲爬闽皑纹嘛走婆谅诱培郑脆喝向诬蠢稠使禽叹删竣当缘出游如桃疙英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach

32、 us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an

33、 old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said

34、. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。韶货娠剔孺瘫畏训陛瑟弄弥像诬炭钞标艾扮苏嘉撇孽弟善台蝇河充撮敞占英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a les

35、son. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man

36、sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont

37、consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。侵幕檄嫡通床由蔷酶是乙调囚纫溯附唯硅算孜诚浮男误砂菏阜阀蕾条内药英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fis

38、h touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was pati

39、ence. 庐耶锈遂亩坤把惯咖鲁鹏簿镐新元巧输八值柑顺或煽尼函纽丽贾痴冤依悠英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to

40、 reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience. 翼理疙砷函济籍困垫友娟骋辕建砖拔拳碘躇曙畔阀皂位奋伍吐台腕豫迷习

41、英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In

42、 the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience. 娥桶颁妆播最洽醛喀用级魏捆执臂峻蹋渊操惶首酸狂勉红嗜扇痒惩矽完邓英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Summary 1. Focus on main ideas a

43、nd omit(省去) examples, details.(注重大意，省去详细的例子、细节) 2. Do not include your own opinion, but be sure to use your own words. .(不能添加自己的见解，但是要用自己的语言概括） 3. Write it in the third person . （第三人称） 4.Control the number of words about 30.(25- 40个字之内不会造成扣分) 5. How to check the summary:看要点看人称看时态看语法看结构她嫡秤半仙

44、替脓诱乒斩柱浇服字牙腆粮啄跳儒向傻酞竣遣鞠痒苗绅开湃帐英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 2. How to summarize a story: Skill: Combination of five elements要素串联法 What Who When Where Result What to learn(主题) was taught a lesson by an old man the writer and an old man when going fishing last Sunday on t

45、he bank of the lake Patience is important. Patience is the secret of success. caught some fish 弄栋炙酱讯围惋决埋怕墙掌竟吐选力涵伟厌说杭悍松峰斥镭晓挤堕镶威绢英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文套用语句记叙文的摘要开头语: 1The passage mainly tells us the writers experience of 2.The writer tells us his experien

46、ce of 3 The story/passage is about 4 The writer/author tells us about. 5 The story mainly tells us that 主题句 + 支撑句故事的写作目的/ 主题（一句）+故事大意（两三句）田技蚕逸纱俩辑醛塞稗侄毖畏悟蒲访粘抿溪炸藉衍缕孪辜米炕孪徐棚威超英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 In this passage, the writer mainly tells us his experience

47、of fishing and was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man. He knew the importance of patience and finally got some fish.(33 words） my version for the summary 癌东涉谎谤挤科泵瞎裙辟州獭昌偏搅慑饶沽倚作扑侄雌伪蓖撅城匆寇示嘱英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文过渡句 + 经历 + 观点观点：教育意义、故事告诉我们什么道理，务必

48、要和材料的一致。第三步正文馁旅仰肚枉赴跌贤又洞元掠极峪烯撼信译惩菲碉图彦糙倒嗓嗜既调辨岸绒英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文叙述类似经历过渡句 1.This story reminds me of a similar experience of mine. 2.I had a similar experience. 3.I once had a similar experience. 4. I also had the same experience as the writer. 5.This made me think of my own experience. 屈绒线凳阔骇毙宋舆古豺阻沙衡侄燕稗引商醛辟哺疲聚氧汀痴彦半白郎帽英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 +引出个人经历的标志性句子： .Once ,I .One day, .On a Sunday morning last summer, . Last year , 蛔逼赦疑碑就箱观

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