1、模块主题写作六模块主题写作六Module 6 Problems模块主题写作六Module 6 Problems模块主题写作六话题分析话题分析 本模块以本模块以“问题问题”为话题,讲述了青少年在成长过程中遇到为话题,讲述了青少年在成长过程中遇到的一些问题,并提出了解决问题的方法。通过本模块的学习,的一些问题,并提出了解决问题的方法。通过本模块的学习,学生应树立正确的人生观和价值观,并能学会运用学生应树立正确的人生观和价值观,并能学会运用if条件句描写条件句描写某种假设情况。某种假设情况。模块主题写作六典型例题典型例题 假如你是李华,你的好朋友假如你是李华,你的好朋友Lisa不久前参加达人秀节目被
2、淘汰不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了,她被这次失败困扰,无心学习。请你给她写一封电子邮件,就发了,她被这次失败困扰,无心学习。请你给她写一封电子邮件,就发生在她身上的问题给予合理化建议:生在她身上的问题给予合理化建议:1正确看待达人秀节目,享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果;正确看待达人秀节目,享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果;2提醒她实现理想的途径有很多,只有努力才能获得成功;提醒她实现理想的途径有很多,只有努力才能获得成功;3鼓励她好好学习,也不要放弃个人爱好,开心地度过每一天。鼓励她好好学习,也不要放弃个人爱好,开心地度过每一天。模块主题写作六要求:要求:1包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行
3、文连贯;包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2词数:词数:6080词词(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);3邮件中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名等相关信息。邮件中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名等相关信息。_模块主题写作六思路点拨思路点拨 模块主题写作六素材积累素材积累 短语:短语:1.because of _ 2.sharewith_ e true _ 4.be good for _ 5.in addition _ 6.by doing sth._ 7.不遗余力地学习不遗余力地学习 _ 8.毫无疑问毫无疑问 _ 模块主题写作六 由于
4、由于和和分享分享实现实现对对有好处有好处 另外另外通过做某事通过做某事spare no effort to studywithout doubt模块主题写作六句型:句型:1.Im sorry to hear that2.Id like to do sth.3.there is no need to take the result too seriously.4.Itbeadj.(for sb.)to do sth.5.and only by working hard can you achieve your goals.模块主题写作六Dear Lisa,Im sorry to hear tha
5、t you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show.Id like to share my thoughts on this matter with you.Yes,talent shows may change ones future.They offer the opportunity to show ones talents,and give people a way to make their dreams come true.Since only some people are truly talent
6、ed,there is no need to take the result too seriously.It may not be good for us teenagers to become famous overnight.So just enjoy the process.高分模板高分模板 In addition,there are many ways to success,and only by working hard can you achieve your goals.As a teenager,you should spare no effort to study and
7、develop your interests at the same time,which,without doubt,will enrich your future life.Hope youll be happy every day.Yours,Li Hua模块主题写作六模块主题写作六名师点评名师点评 运用运用“there is no need to do sth.”句式说明写信者对此活动句式说明写信者对此活动的看法。的看法。运用运用“Itbeadj.for sb.to do sth.”句式分析了一夜成名句式分析了一夜成名对青少年来说未必是好事。对青少年来说未必是好事。在信的结尾运用在信的
8、结尾运用“Hope从句从句”表达了写信者的美好祝愿。表达了写信者的美好祝愿。小试身手小试身手 随着年龄的增长,青少年越来越想摆脱父母的束缚,但是遇到烦随着年龄的增长,青少年越来越想摆脱父母的束缚,但是遇到烦恼和问题的时候又需要有人提供建议。那么从青少年的角度,你觉得恼和问题的时候又需要有人提供建议。那么从青少年的角度,你觉得如何才能和父母沟通得更好?请根据以上提示,写一篇不少于如何才能和父母沟通得更好?请根据以上提示,写一篇不少于8080词的词的短文。短文。模块主题写作六模块主题写作六One possible version:With the growth of teenagers,they
9、dont want to depend on their parents.But when they face problems,they need someone to give them suggestions.Should teenagers share their secrets with their parents?As far as I am concerned,parents are the right persons to share secrets with.We teenagers are too young to make important decisions,or a
10、t least,we need suggestions when we need to make a decision.Parents have rich experience and their rich experience can help us take the right direction.模块主题写作六 Therefore,we need to have a better communication with our parents.There is no doubt that the older we grow,the better understanding we should have with our parents.