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1、Sophia,如何添加细节描写,读后续写微技能指导之二,2017.11 浙江高考真题回放 Para 2 We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way._,The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power. Book1 “Annes Best Friend”,I closed my eyes in the speeding car. Winding rivers, l
2、ofty mountains, deep valleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.,举例：当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。 At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt very_. 当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕，嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。 At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that my throat _and my knees felt_. 当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕，吓呆了，不敢动弹 At
3、the sight of the fierce wolf, I _with terror, too scared to _an inch. 当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗 At the sight of the fierce wolf, I was _by a strong sense of horror and my palms were_,表示害怕的心理,scared,tightened,weak,froze,move,seized,sweating,仿写练习：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。 When the host announced that she wo
4、n the prize, she felt_. 眼睛因兴奋而闪烁。 When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes _with excitement. 激动得心砰砰跳 When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was _with excitement. 兴奋不能自已 When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took_ of her,表示兴奋的心理,thrilled,
5、twinkled,thumping,hold,仿写练习： 一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。 Upon_the bad news, she felt extremely sad. 心痛，眼泪直流。 Upon hearing the bad news, her heart_, tears _down her cheeks. 悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话 Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with_, had trouble speaking. 被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣 Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized
6、by a burst of _and couldnt help crying_.,表示悲伤的心理,hearing_,ached,streaming,sadness,grief,bitterly,仿写练习: Tony感到很绝望 Tony felt hopeless_/_. 事故发生后，Tony感觉突然被投入黑暗之中并且陷入绝望 As the result of an accident, Tony was suddenly _a world of darkness and _into hopelessness. 事故发生后，Tony感觉被遗忘、忽视并且陷入绝望 Tony felt _and was
7、 getting desperate with loneliness. 托尼被对一切事情充满期待并积极对待的信念所抛弃,表示绝望的心理,desperate,thrown into,sank,left out,deserted,Tonys beliefs in looking forward and seeing the positive in everything_ him,仿写练习:当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。 .When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was_. 非常幸福; 心满意足 When his mother kis
8、sed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on_ of the world. 眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间 When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face _and his bright smile _the room. 欢欣雀跃,表示开心的心理,happy/delighted/full of joy,top,lit up,beamed,danced,When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his eyes _with joy
9、 and sweetness.,仿写练习: 她感到非常羞愧。 She felt_. 脸上滚烫 She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face_. 血液涌上脸颊 So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood to _her face. 快哭了,表示羞愧的心理,ashamed,burning,rush,to,So ashamed did she feel that she was close _tears.,仿写练习: Sheldon感到非常生气。 Sheldon felt very_ 冲出房间；
10、狠狠摔门 Sheldon felt so angry that he _out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. 怒火中烧；挥舞拳头 Boiling with_, Sheldon_ his fist at me 充满愤怒；说不出话,表示生气的心理,angry,stormed,rage,fury,Filled with_, Sheldon was unable to utter a single word.,shook,The player lost his balance, _back and toppled over.
11、这个运动员失去了平衡，向后趔趄摔倒了。 She _out of bed and _to the window. 她溜下床，踮起脚尖走向窗户怒火中烧；挥舞拳头 The man make a _for the door and escaped from the scene. 那个人向门冲去，逃离了现场。,表示人的行走之态,staggered,slipped,tiptoed,rush,The whole company is _about the reason for his dismissal. (说长道短；八卦) 整个公司都在谈论他被免职的原因。 He _against the strict r
12、ules of the reality show. (小声咕哝) 他私下低声抱怨真人秀的严苛规则。 Treated so unfairly, she _in pain and anger. 被如此不公正地对待，她痛苦而又愤怒的嚎叫。,表示人的说话方式,gossiping,murmured,howled,得知问题所在之后，他的大脑开始急速运转，想要想出一个好的解决方案。 After he knew what the problem was, his mind began to_, trying to think of a good solution 独自一人时，他总是会想到那可怕的经历 When
13、 left alone, he would always be _by that horrible experience 在他洗澡时，突然想到了一个好主意 When he was taking a shower, a brilliant idea suddenly _his mind,表示人的思考,race,haunted,crossed,天气很闷热 The weather was so_.This weather is terrible. 我汗流浃背 This weather is terrible, I am sweating_ 天气很闷热，一丝风也没有，稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。 The
14、weather was so hot that there was no wind, and the thick air seemed to be_. 天气很闷热，我都没法呼吸了。希望很快能够凉快一点。 The weather was so hot that I can hardly_.I hope it will be cooler soon.,关于天气炎热的描写,hot,buckets/like a pig,frozen,breathe,下起了大雨 It was raining cats and _. There was a heavy downpour. 溪水上涨，风吹着拍打着房子。 I
15、t was raining cats and dogs, the streams _and the winds _and beat against the house. 我到家时全湿了。 It was raining cats and dogs. And I was all _when I got home.,关于雨的描写,dogs,blew,rose,wet,The _of the sun fills my lungs. 阳光的甜美充满了我的肺。 The first ray of sunlight is too _to touch. 第一缕阳光太脆弱，触摸不到。 Spring breeze
16、draws the curtain of clouds and the _floods into the classroom 春风卷起云幕，阳光照进教室 The whole world _with one breath of the sunshine 整个世界在阳光的照耀下绽放,关于太阳的描写,sweetness,sunshine,fragile,blossoms,When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the _sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. 当我沐浴在阳光下；琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全
17、身的肌肤) 2.雾蒙蒙的群山间点缀着小屋和田地 _mountains were _with small farms and villages. 3. 入暮时分，我的脚步与优雅地随风飘扬的芦苇相伴 The sound of my footsteps was accompanied only by the _waving reeds.,关于和平景象的描写,amber-like,Mist-covered,dotted,gracefully,The sky is overcast, darkened with _clouds. 乌云密布；黑云压顶 On that dark and stormy nig
18、ht, the waves were crashing and the winds were_. 海浪肆意拍打；劲风咆哮 The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds _and_ against the house. 暴风骤雨,关于暴风天气的描写,gloomy,howling,blew,beat,surrounding scenes?,1. As _, （天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）he quickened his steps.,2. _(微风) stroked his head , as if comforting a
19、ll his tiredness.,the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed,The gentle breeze,3. From the distance, he saw _(昏暗的灯光) in the village.,some dim light,Para.1 He took the strawberries home.(a sentence),Practice 1,1. .it was dark. (增加细节描写),The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness.,2016.10 浙江高考真题应用 Para 1 But no more helocopteres came and it was getting dark again._,She had no choice but to stop for another night. A gust of cold wind blew and she started to miss the warmth of Toms hug.,Practice 2,谢谢聆听！,