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1、Sophia April 1, 2019,改进：1.深度，难度，将主题句与拓展句一起。2.注重思维的开发，英语提纲要点提练。,Writing a topic sentence,water bottle sweater compass sandwiches camera,I need a water bottle for the hike in case I get thirsty. A sweater is useful if it gets cold. A compass will help me go in the right direction. Sandwiches will be a
2、n easy-to-carry snack. I can use a camera to take pictures of unusual or attractive places.,Q: Is it a paragraph?,I need a water bottle for the hike in case I get thirsty. A sweater is useful if it gets cold. A compass will help me go in the right direction. Sandwiches will be an easy-to-carry snack
3、. I can use a camera to take pictures of unusual or attractive places.,A: No, it isnt.,Writing a topic sentence,I need a water bottle for the hike in case I get thirsty. A sweater is useful if it gets cold. A compass will help me go in the right direction. Sandwiches will be an easy-to-carry snack.
4、I can use a camera to take pictures of unusual or attractive places.,Can we make it a paragraph? How can we make it a paragraph?,We can make it a paragraph by giving it a central idea, or a focus. We give it a focus by stating the central idea in one sentence, which is called the topic sentence.,Wri
5、ting a topic sentence,I need many items to be ready for a safe, enjoyable hike. I need a water bottle for the hike in case I get thirsty. A sweater is useful if it gets cold. A compass will help me go in the right direction. Sandwiches will be an easy-to-carry snack. I can use a camera to take pictu
6、res of unusual or attractive places.,Writing a topic sentence,topic sentence,主题句一般位于段首。通常为一个完整的句子，用以概括，叙述，说明该段的主题。,It is no doubt that Internet has played an important role in our daily life. Firstly, it provides us with a more convient way of searching for useful information. Secondly, it saves our
7、 time which benefit us a lot.,Find out the main idea of these paragraphs?,topic sentence,There are three reasons why John is not going to university. In the first place, his family is quite poor and, since he has four young brothers and sisters still at school, he feels he should help his family fin
8、ancially as soon as possible. Secondly, if he went to university, his mother would be left alone to look after the young children. Finally, he has been offered a good job with excellent chances of promotion. Consequently, although he wants to go to university very much, John is going to take the job
9、 instead.,topic sentence,However, the internet will not replace traditional media like newspaper. For one thing, not all readers like using internet or can use it,especially the ages. For another, newspaper is easy to handle, which is a good experience for them.,Find out the main idea of these parag
10、raphs?,topic sentence,summary1:topic sentence tells us the main idea of a paragraph quickly!,How to write the topic sentence,1. the patterns(模式) of topic sentence. 2. the techniques（技巧） of writing good topic sentence.,主题句模式,直接翻译,回答要点,明确观点,说出感受,引出经历,表明看法,“重要性”表达,主题句的模式,How to write the topic sentence
11、,1.建设绿色校园的重要性。 It is of great importance to build a green campus. 2.你怎么看待老师对学生的影响。 A good teacher plays a really important role in students lives.,直接翻译要点, 表达“重要性”,明确观点,3.讲述一次你或你的朋友想家的经历 His story reminds me of my similar experience.,引出经历。,1）主题句要概括一定内容，不要空泛，否则扩展句将难以说明和支持它。 eg：空泛：English language is v
12、ery important. 概括：English language is very important in our daily life. 2）尽量使用简单句或简洁明了的句子。 eg：简洁：Collecting stamps is her hobby. 复杂:She likes collecting stamps which is her hobby.,A,B,A,B,techniques of writing topic sentence,3）主题句应该做到句子完整和表达的主题思想完整。 eg：不完整：How to write a composition. 完整：How to write
13、 a composition is not an easy thing to talk about. 4）关键词是直接表达主题的词汇，它决定段落的内容和展开的方法，引导整个段落的发展。 eg：Three other benefits have been found, in addition to the green teas heart-healthy, anti-cancer, stress-reducing effects.,A,B,Exercise: write down the topic sentece of the paragraph,I had a wonderful summe
14、r. First, I started sleeping in every day. I would then go swimming with my friends. I stayed up late watching TV a lot, and I went to camp for a week. I wished my summer would never end!,There are two reasons why Canada is one of the best countries in the world. First, Canada has an excellent healt
15、h care system. All Canadians have access to medical services at a reasonable price. Second, Canada has a high standard of education.,There will be a lot of wonderful activities . First, we can take part in the English play to build up your confidence. Then, we can also join in reading classical Engl
16、ish poems and I think it will help us enjoy the charm of English.,College life is an important stage in our life. It is in college that we begin to live and study by ourselves. It is in college that we learn to be independent of our parents. It is in college that we, like Newton, are searching for b
17、eautiful shells on the beach of knowledge. Meanwhile, it is in college that we become matured and fully grown up, both physically and mentally. Consequently, we should cherish it and make the most of it.,Find out the structure,concluding sentence,supporting sentences,a sentence to tell the reader wh
18、at the paragraph is mainly about.,sentences to give more detailed information about the topic sentence.,topic sentence,a sentence to end a paragraph or to summarize(总结） the ideas.,Summary2: A paragraph is made up of 3 parts:,Topic sentence; Supporting sentences; Concluding sentence.,a sentence to te
19、ll the reader what the paragraph is mainly about.,sentences to give more detailed information about the topic sentence.,a sentence to end a paragraph or to summarize(总结） the ideas.,(主题句 ),(扩展句/阐述句 ),(结论句/结尾句 ),随着时代的发展，看电影成为非常重要的一种休闲方式。有人喜欢去电影院看电影，有人选择在网上看电影。请根据以下信息写一篇短文，分析人们选择不同观影方式的原因，并表达你自己的看法。,Do
20、 you like to go to the cinema or watch a film online? People have different answers to the question.,There are some people who think that going to the cinema is a better choice. To begin with, the screen is much larger than that we have at home. Whats more, the image and sound effects are amazing, w
21、hich are totally different from what we feel at home. Besides, its good way to communicate with friends if you invite them to go with you.,Other people, however, hold the view that they prefer to watch movies at home. Because its convenient and money-saving to watch films online.In addition, You can
22、 enjoy the films you choose without being disturbed in such a quiet place.,It is my opinion that although the tickets are very expensive, Ill go to the cinema instead of watching films online. In this way, Ill have a good opportunity to communicate with my parents or friends. Whats more, the magic of silver screen is so fascinating that it cannot be replaced by other ways of watching films.,1. the importances and functions of topic sentence. 2. the patterns of topic sentences. 3. the structures of a paragraph.,Summary and Self-evaluation,THANKYOU,