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1、,VS,1.几乎照抄 原文,It is common that university students tend to make fun of others. -裘韵 改变句型+改变词组 The enjoyment of making fun of others are shared by university students generally. -候怡雯,概要写作常见错误分析,No one knows why university students enjoy practical jokes, especially the hoax.,照搬原文词组 X 照搬原文句型 X,VS,2.过于具
2、体 不够概括,One university student, for example, offered the police and workmen wrong information deliberately to make them misunderstand each other. -方健栩 用恰当词组概括大意,概要写作常见错误分析,A university students cheated two workmen that a student dressed up as police to cheat them and then told the police that two stu
3、dents dressed up as workmen to tear up the road.,描述具体内容 X 提及具体数字 X 照搬原文词组 X,VS,3.字数不足 表述单一,概要写作常见错误分析,University students like cheating others. One student cheated both police and workmen. At last, they found they were all cheated.,VS,3.字数不足 表述单一,概要写作常见错误分析,University students like cheating others.
4、One student cheated both police and workmen. At last, they found they were all cheated.,安全字数： 60-80,概要写作美文赏析2,一、要点齐全： 1. 害怕 2. 路径 3. 改变 4.等待,二、句式多变,三、连词得当（词性得当）,四、颜值高+字数可控,VS,1. 要点遗漏,It is common that university students tend to make fun of others. -裘韵 改变句型+改变词组 The enjoyment of making fun of others
5、 are shared by university students generally. -候怡雯,概要写作常见错误分析2,No one knows why university students enjoy practical jokes, especially the hoax.,照搬原文词组 X 照搬原文句型 X,1、缺少要点,VS,2. 缺少连词,It is common that university students tend to make fun of others. -裘韵 改变句型+改变词组 The enjoyment of making fun of others ar
6、e shared by university students generally. -候怡雯,概要写作常见错误分析2,No one knows why university students enjoy practical jokes, especially the hoax.,照搬原文词组 X 照搬原文句型 X,2、缺少连词,VS,3. 词性滥用,It is common that university students tend to make fun of others. -裘韵 改变句型+改变词组 The enjoyment of making fun of others are s
7、hared by university students generally. -候怡雯,概要写作常见错误分析2,No one knows why university students enjoy practical jokes, especially the hoax.,照搬原文词组 X 照搬原文句型 X,3、词性滥用,VS,4. 概括有失得当-过度或欠够,It is common that university students tend to make fun of others. -裘韵 改变句型+改变词组 The enjoyment of making fun of others are shared by university students generally. -候怡雯,概要写作常见错误分析2,No one knows why university students enjoy practical jokes, especially the hoax.,照搬原文词组 X 照搬原文句型 X,4、概括有失得当,5、句式很傻很天真,