怎样做书面表达.ppt

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1、怎样做英语书面表达题？,writing,“书面表达”是考生丢分现象最严重的一道题。如何培养和提高写作能力，已经成为广大外语教育工作者倍加关注的课题。那么，中学生怎样做书面表达题呢？,Lead-in,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,先思考所需要的词语。,Words and Expressions do a good deed 做好事 wallet n. 钱包 owner n. 主人 calling card 名片 address n. 地址 taxi 出租车 telephone number 电话号码 public adj. 公共的 reward vt. 回报 politely adj. 有礼貌的

2、 refuse vt. 拒绝,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,让我们一起学习下列词语。,1. 怎样写英语书面表达？ （24个字） _ _ 2.简述怎样扩展每幅图画要点：（4增加1发散） _ _.,三案导学检测案 北京程中一,注意审题，确定要点。扩展要点，连句成篇。,全面检查，书写规范。,（1）增加主语或谓语(2）增加地点状语（3）增加时间 状语（4）增加其它修饰语（5）发散思维扩充内容,3. 拓展后每个句子必须符合基本句子结构。句子结构怎样够成： 结构（1） 结构（2） 结构（3） 结构（4） 结构（5） 5. 怎样连句成篇？,三案导学检测案 北京程中一,主语 + 系词 + 表语 主语 + 动词

3、 主语 + 动词 + 宾语 主语 + 动词 + 间宾 + 直宾 主语 + 动词 + 宾语 + 宾补,把已经写好的句子连成短文。,6. 全面检查，检查什么？考虑什么？ 7. 书写规范。要做到 _。,三案导学检测案 北京程中一,检查拼写、标点符号错误；人称、时态、语态错误；句子结构和逻辑错误；考虑语篇结构；考虑句式的变化和词汇的丰富。,“横三齐，竖平行”。,写书面表达 要注意以下几点： 1、标题 Title 2、主题句 Topic sentence 3、扩展句 Develop sentences 4、总结句（作者态度）Conclusion sentence (writers attitude),w

4、riting,A. Pre-writing,三案导学强化训练 北京程中一,II. 写书面表达的步骤: 1. 仔细阅读写作要求及注意事项。 2. 确定格式、题材、人称、时态及基本要点。 3. 列出要点, 列出重要的词语和必要句型。 4. 丰富要点, 将句子补充完整, 打好草稿。 5. 检查草稿，认真写到试卷上 （要“横三齐，竖平行”），并再复查一遍。,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,1）主语 + 系词 + 表语 They are busy. 2）主语 + 动词 She is singing. 3）主语 + 动词 + 宾语 She studies English. 4）主语 + 动词 + 宾语 +

5、宾补 We asked him to come back . 5）主语 + 动词 + 间宾 + 直宾 Mum bought me a new dress.,主系表， 主谓（宾）， 主语加谓语， 加上间直宾， 若有宾语补足语， 紧把宾语跟。 （间-间接宾语，直-直接宾语）,III、基本句子结构,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,李萍在上学路上拾到一个钱包。请根据以下六幅图写一篇短文，词数100左右 。 参考词：名片 a calling card 回报 reward,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,B. While-writing 1. 注意审题 确定要点,1. see a wallet 2. find

6、 money and a calling card 3. call the owner 4. wait at the bus stop 5. owner came 6. reward, refuse,题材：记叙文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般过去时,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,1.Li Ping saw a wallet on the ground.,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,第1步,2.Yesterday on her way to school, Li Ping saw a wallet on the ground near the bus stop.,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,第

7、2步,2.She found a lot of money and a calling card in it.,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,第1步,2.She opened the wallet . She found a lot of money and a calling card in it.,and,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,第2步,3. She called the owner.,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,第1步,3.From the calling card, she knew the owners name, address and telephone number.

8、She thought the owner must be very worried. She went to a public telephone. She called the owner.,So she,and she,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,第2步,4. She waited at the bus-stop.,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,第1步,5. The owner came.,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,第2步,5. The owner came by taxi very soon. Li Ping gave the wallet to her.,三案导学书面表达 北京

9、程中一,第2步,6. The owner took out a 100-yuan note to reward her.,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,第1步,6.The owner was very thankful to her. The owner took out a 100-yuan note to reward her . Li Ping politely refused her. She went to school happily.,so,that she,But,and,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,第2步,4、连句成篇,把写好的句子连成短文，打好草稿。,三案导学书面表达 北

10、京程中一,正确使用下列连接词： 1 表示时间顺序：first/firstly, second/secondly, third/thirdly, then, after that, finally等。 2 表示递进关系：besides, also, Whats more等。 3 表示因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result, thanks to 等。 4 表示转折关系：but, yet, however, while等。 5 表示条件关系：if, unless, as long as, so long as等。 6 过渡性插入语：generally spe

11、aking, I think, in other words, in a word等。,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,5、全面检查,检查草稿，修改拼写、标点符号错误，修改人称、时态、语态错误，修改句子结构和逻辑错误。考虑语篇结构、考虑句式的变化和词汇的丰富。,C. Post-writing,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,请找出优点和错误 Li Ping did good deed yesterday. On her way to home, she saw a wallet lay on the ground near the bus stop. She opened the wallet a

12、nd found lot of money and a calling card in it. From the calling card, she knew the owners name, address and telephone number. So she went to a public telephone and called on the owner. Then she waited at the bus stop. When the owner got to, Li Ping gave the wallet to her. The owner was very thankfu

13、l to Li Ping that she took out a 100-yuan note to reward her. However, Li Ping politely refused her and went home happily. What a good girl she is !,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,Li Ping did good deed yesterday. On her way to home, she saw a wallet lay on the ground near the bus stop. She opened the wallet and fou

14、nd lot of money and a calling card in it. From the calling card, she knew the owners name, address and telephone number. So she went to a public telephone and called on the owner. Then she waited at the bus stop. When the owner got to, Li Ping gave the wallet to her. The owner was very thankful to L

15、i Ping that she took out a 100-yuan note to reward her. However, Li Ping politely refused her and went home happily. What a good girl she is !,请找出优点和错误,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,点评: deed是可数名词，表达“做一件好事”，英语为do a good deed。 On her way to home改为On her way to school与题目“在上学的路上”保持一致。 改lay为lying, 构成现在分词短语作宾语补足语。 a lot

16、 of = lots of 是一个固定词组，不可更改。 这里So用得好, 起承上启下的作用。 call on sb. 拜访某人。“给某人打电话”可用call sb.。 get to 是有“到达”的意思，但当其后没有地点名词时不需要带介词to。这里got to可以改为arrived。 very改为so, 构成sothat; went home改为went to school与题目“在上学的路上”保持一致; 这里However用得很好。 结尾特别好，前后呼应，总结全文。,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,6、书写规范,书写要“横三齐，竖平行。”,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,Li Ping did a

17、 good deed yesterday. On her way to school, she saw a wallet lying on the ground near the bus stop. She opened the wallet and found a lot of money and a calling card in it. From the calling card, she knew the owners name, address and telephone number. So she went to a public telephone and called the

18、 owner. Then she waited at the bus stop. When the owner arrived, Li Ping gave the wallet to her. The owner was so thankful to Li Ping that she took out a 100-yuan note to reward her. However, Li Ping politely refused her and went to school happily. What a good girl she is !,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,总 结 做英语书面表达题要做到以下几点：,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,注意审题，确定要点。 扩展要点，连句成篇。 全面检查，书写规范。,注意审题，确定要点。 扩展要点，连句成篇。 全面检查，书写规范。,怎样做书面表达题呢？,三案导学书面表达 北京程中一,写作练习,5月3日，你参观了一个农场。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。 注意： 1、日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增减细节，使日记连贯； 2、词数100左右。,1 2,3 4,5 6,按照“24字英语书面表达教学法”的要求 做下面书面表达题。,作业：,