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1、2016 年 12 月阅卷组 14 分高分范文：【无注解版范文】Invention has always been crucial to human society as it has pushed us all the way through history to where we are in this modern world. To put it more clearly, inventions bring us with innovative technologies that significantly alter the way we live and improve the q
2、uality of our lives. For instance, the invention of motor cars has rendered it possible for people to travel fast and conveniently, pulling people closer to each other. The creation of computers has enabled scientists to deal with large amounts of data in seconds, which was previously beyond the cap
3、ability of human mind.Important as invention is, it is by no means an easy task to come up with something new. Thus measures need to be taken to encourage it. First, schools should focus more on the cultivation of creativity among students through programs and activities. Second, government should g
4、ive more financial rewards to individuals and institutions that have made ingenious inventions. Third, law for intellectual property protection needs to be formulated and enforced more effectively.In a nutshell, invention is significant to a country developments. Therefore, measures need to be taken
5、 educationally, financially and legally to boost it.【双语注解版范文】Inventionhasalwaysbeen crucial重要的 tohumansocietyasithas pushed 推动 us all the way through history to where 地点状语从句 we are inthismodernworld.Toputitmore clearly 清楚地 ,inventionsbringuswith innovative 创新的 technologiesthatsignificantly 显著地 alter
6、 改变 theway we live and improve the quality of our lives. For instance 例如 , the invention ofmotorcarshas rendered使得 itpossible forpeopletotravelfastand conveniently 便利地 , pulling 拉近 people closer to each other. The creation ofcomputers has enabled scientists todealwithlargeamounts ofdatainseconds,whi
7、ch 非限定性定语从句 was previously 之前地 beyond the capabilityof human mind.一直以来，发明对于人类社会都极为重要，因为在历史上它将我们推动到现如今的现代社会。说得更明白些，发明带给我们创新的技术，这些技术显著地改变了我们的生活方式并提高了我们的生活品质。例如，汽车的发明使得人们可以快速地、便利地旅行，拉近了人与人之间的距离。电脑的发明使得科学家可以在几秒钟的时间中处理大量的数据，这在之前是超出人类大脑的能力。Important as尽管：倒装句 invention is, it is by no means 绝对不 an easy tas
8、k to come up with something new. Thus measures need to be taken to encourage it. First, schools should focus more on thecultivation 培养 of creativity among students through programs and activities. Second, government should give more financial rewards 奖励 to individuals and institutions that have made
9、ingenious 有独创性的 inventions. Third, law for intellectual property 知识产权 protection needs to beformulated 制定 and enforced moreeffectively 有效地 .无论如何想到新的东西不是一件易事，尽管发明是很重要的。因此，需要采取措施来鼓励发明。首先，学校需要通过项目和活动来更多地关注学生创造力的培养。其次，政府需要向那些做出独创性发明的个人和机构提供更多的财政奖励。第三，需要制定知识产权保护的有关法律，并且更有效地执行这些法律。In a nutshell 简而言之 , inv
10、ention is significant to a country developments.Therefore, measures need to be takeneducationally 教育上地 , financially 财政上 and legally 法律上地 to boost推动 it.简而言之，发明对于一个国家的发展很重要。因此，需要从教育上、财政上和法律上采取一些措施来推动发明创造。【高分亮点分析】1. 高端词替换低级词：crucial - importantrendered it possible - make it possibleby no means - not2. 复杂句式 - 简单句For instance, the invention of motor cars has rendered it possible for people to travel fast and conveniently, pulling people closer to each other.3. 副词的妙用Therefore, measures need to be taken educationally, financially and legally to boost it.