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1、看高分作文如何突破,第一章 写作对策：,1.内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖要点 2.作文结构层次是否清晰 3.语言表达是否流畅，无重大语病，有无逻辑错误 4.是否能恰当的使用过渡性的词语 5.作文字数是否达到要求 6.卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮,第二章 高分作文捷径,第一节 黄金模板的学习 模板作文可分为三个阶段。 第一阶段：理解 第二阶段：模仿 第三阶段：活用,二.高分作文秘诀,作文要想拿高分，就必须有“闪光点”，也就是文章最出彩的地方。那么“闪光点”究竟到底包括拿些方面呢？ 第一，结构 清晰的结构是最大的“闪光点”。 第二，词和词组 对于相同的意思，我们掌握的词或词组越多越好，这样可以根据不同的情
2、况灵活使用。比如某人某人持怎么样的观点，不仅可以用think,还可以用hold,argue,maintain,take it for granted等词表达。论证观点不要只用first，second和third.如果是两点，可以用on the one hand,on the other hand或for one thing,for another.如果是三点，可以使用的词非常多，如to begin with,moreover,whats the most important或in the first place,in the second place,last but not least,第三
3、，句型 我们应对英语中的句子有正确的认识，避免出现破句、断句、连写句等明显错误；加大并列句和复合句的比例，应为连续使用多个断句的效果非常不好。 第四，例子 举例最常见的句型结构是takefor example或lets takeas an example 第五，谚语与名言 用谚语时常用的句型是as the famous saying goes 第六，修辞 这里所指的仅是一些修辞手法，如比喻、拟人和排比等。 第七，插入语 插入语看似用不经意的手段，却能直接显出作者的功底，所以为阅卷老师所青睐。如however,in my mind,有时非限制性定语从句可以作为插入语 第八，标点符号 标点符号是帮
4、助文字正确记录语言的一套符号，是书面语言不可缺少的组成部分。,三、写作常用关键词,文章不只是提供信息、陈述观点，而且还要感染他人，那么如此短的文章中肯定要多处应用极强语气的词，以引起阅卷老师的注意。现举例如下： 1.Most和more than most可用在形容词前面加强语气，表示“非常”，比very的语气要强的多 2.Undoubtedly，unquestionably，undeniably和Beyond doubt，out of question这一组词和词组语气非常斩钉截铁，非常果断。 3.To some extend、generally和on the whole这一类调节观点的词使得
5、文章在说理中显得客观、适度，避免过于偏激,四、写作常用关键句型,好句为你的作文锦上添花 1.由while引导的状语从句 2.Those who句型 3.倒装句 4.条件状语从句 5.强调句 6.反问句 7.结果状语从句 8.让步状语从句 9.notuntil 10.包含never的否定句 11.平行结构,高分作文黄金模版 批驳类模版（1.批驳做法）,Today more and more people.they argue this practice has several advantages.first，.second，.for example，.分两点举例说明某些人的做法、想法。 I a
6、m afraid Icannot agree with their opinion.to begin with,although you may feel，it doesnt mean.in the second place,.Finally,as to,. 我的不同观点和第三理由；第一句批驳,From the above analysis，we may arrive at the conclusion that is not wise choice.下结论,My view on putting work until the last minute 1.现在有些人主张将其工作留到最后来做 2.
7、我不同意他们的观点，理由是,经典范文,Today more and more people put their work until the last minute.they argue this practice has several advantages .First,the impending dealing gives them a last-minute drive，which can help them finish the job quickly.Second,if they have a lot of time to finish the job，they cannot co
8、ncentrate on they project quickly because they are not pressed by me .For example，some children have some homework for his winter vacation，but they always do it in the last week.,I am afraid I cannot agree with their opinion .To begin with ，although you may feel anxious to finish the work when the d
9、eadline is drowning near，it does not mean you can finish your job with high quality。In the second place ，a wise man will not always leave his task until the last minute . If a person wants to be highly efficient，he should learn to divide his tasks into several small parts ，and set deadlines for each
10、 of them. Finally，as to the children finishing assignments ，I believe that they cannot enjoy themselves with their assignments unfinished.,结构是文章的框架， 搭好架子，好文章就完成80%了。,From the above analysis ，we may arrive at the conclusion that putting work until the last minute is not a wise choice.,批驳类模板 （批驳观点）,Re
11、cently it seems that . Many people，especially the parents，think it will certainly do good to their children because . Moreover, . 某种做法与支持这种做法的观点。 After careful consideration ,I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, .on the other hand , . 从两方面进行批驳；第一句批驳。 We can see clearly
12、that althoughmay bring favorable results，there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investgation before . 下结论。,经典范文,My view on teenagers studying abroad 1.现在有很多青少年出国留学 2.有些人认为这种做法是有益的 3.我认为这种做法是不对的,Recently it seems that among the students who choos
13、e to study abroad ，there are more and more teenagers who study in high school or even elementary schools .Many people ，especially the parents，think it will certainly do good to their children because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance.moreover ，the quality of overs
14、eas education is often higher ，thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future。,After careful consideration ，I have to say the above view is more than biased . On the other hand , early independent life is not necessarily good ，if the chil
15、d cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand , the educational quality is also a question too many foreign universities aim at earning money . When the children come back ， who can guarantee that they adapt to the fierce competition here？ We can
16、see clearly that although teenagers studying abroad may bring favorable results，there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investgation before going abroad .,批驳类模板 （混合类：观点批驳+办法）,Nawdays there is a commonly held belief that .actually,it is not the re
17、al case . 第一句提出观点；第二句立即批驳。 On the one hand , .on the other hand , . Most important of all , . 从三方面来说明。 We need to carry out several measures to promote .First , we should . Second ，we should . 提出两个方面的办法。,经典范文,Blood donation 1.有人认为献血有害健康 2.实际情况并非如此 3.应采取措施促进献血,Nawdays there is a commonly held belief
18、that donating blood will do harm to a persons health . Actually,it is not the real case . On the one hand , the small amount of blood donated in a short time. on the other hand , with the development of medical science ，it is much safer and more convenient now for people to donate blood . Most impor
19、tant of all ,donating blood can help save the lives of dying patients ， which is significant to the hole society.,熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟！,We need to carry out several measures to promote blood donation .First , we should impart medical knowledge to common citizens ，convincing them that blood donation is no
20、t dangerous at all . Second ，we should help people realize that helping others is equal to helping ourselves ，not only because it is a virtue to be ready to help others ,but also because one day we will be those in need of help .,批驳类模板（复合批驳）,It become a common tendency these days for people to many
21、people are opposed to this practice because they think . They also argue that . 第一句说明某些人的做法；第二句写有些人的反对；第三句补充说明。 In my mind , however , I cannot agree with these people on this occasion , . At the same time , . In addition , . 第一句说我不同意这些人的看法；分三点说明。 In conclusion , . 下结论。,经典范文,My view on bank loan 1.现
22、在许多人向银行贷款 2.有些人反对这种做法 3.我不同意这些人的反对意见,It becomes a common tendency these days for people to ask for bank loans to buy a house or a private car. Many people are opposed to this practise because they think bank loan is equal to debt ,and they will always feel burden on their back in the coming years .
23、They also argue that they will not buy anything before they are capable of paying it in case.,In my mind , however, I cannot agree with these people on this occasion .It takes many years for common citizens to earn enough money to buy a house or a car, and asking for a bank loan certaintly shortens
24、the distance between dream and reality . At the same time ,it is not too difficult for people to pay back the money if they have normal jobs . In addition , applying for bank loans can often be a form of investment , which makes it possible for people to earn more money .,In conclusion ,obtaining a bank loan will certainly do us good so long as we make it reasonable .,词汇PK台,Thank you for your attention ！,