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1、Section Writing如何写建议信如何写建议信 文体指导 建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信有可能是写给 个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织或机 构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信一定要礼貌当先，要写得简明扼要、 目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 一、建议信的结构 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。 主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体 情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。 结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要有礼貌，使对方容易接受。 二、建议信的语言
2、 语言一定要委婉、礼貌，顾及他人感受。慎重使用 must，should，ought to 才 能使对方能够高兴地接受你的劝告或建议。要想提出好建议，你必须展示出独特 的见解。 亮点句式 1I would like to suggest that.我想建议 2I am writing to express my views concerning. 我写信来是要表达有关我的看法。 3You have asked for my advice with regard to.and I will try to make some suggestions.你问我有关的事情，我会尝试着提出一些建议。 4If
3、 I were you，I would.如果我是你，我会 5It seems to me that you could.我认为你可以 6I think it would be more beneficial if you could.我想如果你能，可能会 更好。 7I believe you will take my advice into account.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议 的。 8 I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/
4、看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。 9I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.如果这方面有所 改善我会非常开心的。 10I will be ready for further discussing this matter into details.我时刻准备着就 此事进行更详细的讨论。 满分佳作构建 写作任务 你儿子的班主任打电话告诉你你的儿子被发现私下里抽烟，作为父亲或母亲 你写了一封信放在儿子的枕头上，在信里你告诉他吸烟的害处，并告诫他杜绝抽 烟。 提示：1.健康角度； 2经济角度； 3戒烟决心； 4词数 10
5、0 左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear son， You know what a surprise to me when I learn you are smoking these days. 审题谋篇 体裁建议信时态一般现在时 主题告诫儿子杜绝抽烟人称第二人称 结构 第一部分：得知儿子吸烟很吃惊，表露担忧。尽管儿子 做了错事，但作者理解。 第二部分：从健康和经济角度分析吸烟的危害，让儿子 认识到其严重性。 第三部分：表达愿望，相信儿子定能戒烟。 遣词造句 .对接单元词汇 1obey 服从；听从 2specialist 专科医师；专家 3suffer from 遭受 4apart
6、from 除了；远离 5quit 停止；放弃 6lung cancer 肺癌 7cause/lead to/result in导致 .巧用单元句式、语法 (一)完成句子 1众所周知，吸烟有害健康。 As we all know，smoking is harmful to our health. 2吸烟导致许多疾病。 Smoking causes/leads to/results in many illnesses 3吸烟对中学生的危害更大。 Smoking is even more harmful to middle school students 4吸烟对他们的身心健康都有损害。 Smoki
7、ng does great harm to their health physically and mentally 5由吸烟导致的最严重的疾病就是肺癌。 The most serious illness that was caused by smoking is lung cancer. (二)句式升级 6用 it 作形式主语改写 1 句 It is known to all that smoking is harmful to our health. 7用强调句式改写 2 句 It is smoking that causes many illnesses. 8用过去分词短语作定语改写 5
8、 句 The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer. 妙笔成篇 参考范文 Dear son， You know what a surprise to me when I learn you are smoking these days. It is known to all that smoking is harmful to our health.And its even more harmful to middle school students for it does great harm to their healt
9、h physically and mentally.It is smoking that causes many illnesses.A lot of people always suffer from coughing because of smoking.The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile，smoking is also a waste of money.For example，if you spend 15 yuan on a pack of cigarettes every day，t
10、hen in a year that is about 5，400 yuan. It will be more meaningful if the money can be used in a good way.Apart from it，careless smokers may cause dangerous fires. Thus，to keep healthy，you should make your mind to get rid of the bad habit of smoking.Please quit smoking at once. I love you and believe you! Your dad